“To Autumn” – A Resounding Proclamation of Life and Hope
The poem "To Autumn" is an amazing
piece of work written by one of the greatest poets of all time, John
Keats. From a simple reading, the poem paints a beautiful picture of the
coming season. However, one may wonder if there is more to the poem than
what the words simply say. After it is studied and topics such as sound,
diction and imagery are analyzed, one can clearly say that Keats used those
techniques to illustrate the progression of death, and to show that there is
still life at the end of life.
From the very beginning of "To
Autumn,” sound appears to be an important aspect of Keats’s technique.
When the words are studied, there is an even mixture of loud and soft
sounds. Some soft sounding words – words that use consonant sounds that
are soft when spoken such as an s -- include mists, close,
son, bless, mossed, and trees. There are also
the hard sounding words – words that use consonant sounds that are loud when
spoken such as a b or t -- like maturing, round,
thatch, and budding. The words do not appear to be randomly
used, but they seem to have a pattern: the hard and soft sounds come in
pairs. In the second line, we see, "close bosom friend of the
maturing sun.” Close and bosom go together, with close
being loud and soft with the hard c and soft s, and
bosom being loud and soft with the b and s.
The words “maturing sun” are not placed together haphazardly either. Maturing
is a very hard word with the m and t sound; sun
is a very soft word, beginning with an s. Also, in the third
line Keats says, “Conspiring with him how to load and bless.” Autumn is conspiring
. . . to load (loud due to the p and d sounds)
and bless (soft due to the double s sound). Again,
Keats pairs a loud and a soft sound. This gives the whole stanza a generally
loud, lively sound with a quiet hiss in the background. This tells of the great
bounty of the current time, but adds a quiet feeling to it, such as what Keats
was trying to communicate -- that death or a time of quiet is approaching.
The second stanza
has mainly quiet sounds. With words such as oft, store, swath,
seeks, careless, soft-lifted, and drowsed, the
whole stanza is filled with soft s and w
sounds. This makes the stanza very sleepy and slow but with a warm
comfortable feeling. What is most brilliant is that he writes about sleep
and then uses words that sound like sleep to describe it. That makes the
reader really experience how he is explaining death with sounds, not just
words. This change from stanza one also goes along with the progression
of life. It started out loud and young, and now has begun to soften, such
as life does when one grows older or nears death.
The third stanza
somewhat follows the course set down by the previous two stanzas, but it also
does something surprising. One may predict that the third stanza becomes
softer still, following the progression, yet it does not quite do so. It
does start according to prediction, very quiet and feathery, with words such as
stubble-plains, rosy, wailful, sallows, and lives
or dies. This is generally very soft, which continues the
progression, but there is a hitch. Keats writes, "And
full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly-bourn.”
The whole line stands out very radically because it is almost all loud
sounds, especially bleat, with its b and t
along with the voiced long e vowel. In doing so, he seems
to be saying that there is still hope and life even as death is
approaching. This line seems to be the transitional one because, after
it, the sound goes back to the pattern of stanza one, supporting the cry of
life in the previous line. He again matches loud and soft sounds, such as
treble and soft, red breast and whistles, sallows
and twitter. This gives it the same kind of light and lively
feeling as stanza one but only for a couple lines. So, Keats explains the
development of death by going from lively and loud at the beginning, then very
soft, and even softer still. Finally,
he makes his point of how life exists by changing the sound to lively to end
his ode.
The diction and the
imagery also play important roles in the interpretation of the poem "To
Autumn.” Words such as maturing, load, fill, ripeness,
swell, plump, and budding give the dawning of the
poem a very full and luscious feeling. Also, the repetition of the word more
in the phrase “more and still more” is used to further give the impression of a
bountiful time. All of this gives a feeling of youth and aliveness and
goes with the theme because it starts the poem out showing how life is before
if begins to slow down into the progression of death. Very lively
personification is also used. At the start, the Sun and Autumn are called
friends and they are talking and conspiring, such as young children would
do. Also, many of the words are very tactile, such as swell, plump,
budding, and bend. This gives autumn a very real and
concrete feeling that is important because although life starts out real as in
stanza one, death will follow as a quiet, somewhat mysterious concept.
In stanza two the
diction and imagery flow right with the sound and the progress of the
poem. They become sleepy and tired with phrases like “sitting careless,” “soft-lifted,”
“sound asleep,” “drowsed,” and “laden
head.” This gives a feeling of laziness
and goes right with the sounds before because they also slow down the feeling
and show how death is beginning to approach. Keats also uses visual diction
to create imagery in words like seeks, look, watchest, and
seen. These are less concrete than tactile imagery and continue the
progression towards the end. This second stanza helps to make the reader
feel the slowing of life and how it begins to slip out of their grasp but only
allowing them to see the life and no longer feel it.
The last stanza
follows the progression of the previous two, but then alters course. The
two questions in the first line, which are part of the diction, sound bitter,
acting as the realization of death. Keats says, "Where are the songs
of Spring? Aye, where are they?" It is almost as if he is
resentfully asking where that melody is now that death, and autumn, are
here. The diction is full of words pertaining to death, consisting of soft-dying
day, wailful choir, mourn, and lives or dies. They, in
particular, give the beginning part of stanza three a sense of death. However,
he does not make it all bleak by including imagery such as stubble plains
and rosy hue, which paint the approaching death in a softer way while
still sad and mournful. He also used auditory imagery to illustrate the
progression with words such as wailful choir, mourn, treble soft, music,
sing, whistles, and twitters. Sound is the most abstract
concept employed so far and helps one understand the course of death by showing
how it fades into something abstruse.
The, when it looks like everything is lost to death, he completely
changes course and says, "And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly
bourn.” The lamb bleats out, showing that even when death comes there is
still life crying out to be heard. The word bleat especially illustrates
that by just standing out. He finishes out with the hope of life by
including lively images such as crickets singing, red breasts whistling, and swallows
twittering. This ends Keats message of the vitality at the conclusion of
life.
Keats used the poem
"To Autumn" to illustrate the progression of death and the existence
of hope and life in the face of impending death. He uses sound by moving
from a mixture of loud and soft words in stanza one, to mainly soft in stanza
two, to a complete mixture in stanza three of soft then loud. He also
uses diction and imagery by reflecting the quick and kinesthetic constitution
of youth, the slow and full characteristics of the coming death, and the
arrested and barren traits of death, and finally, the resounding proclamation
of life and hope in the very end.