Deconstruction of Thank You, Ma’am
There are a million acts of
kindness each day. Some young man gives a stranger a compliment, or a
teacher brightens a students morning. But, in the world we live in today,
these acts are rare to come by. In this short story Thank You, Ma’am, the
boy, out of mysterious luck, gets taken in by the woman whom he was trying to
steal a purse from. Her actions, following the incident towards the boy,
may have seemed very kind and understanding, but the boy needs a more solid way
of punishment. He requires discipline that will show him that as
complicated as life is, there will not always be someone for you to lean and
depend on.
The first and most foremost thing that would come to mind
when reading this story is how caring Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones was,
that she took in the boy and nurtured him; she tried to teach him between right
and wrong. She gave him food, a nice conversation, and even a chance of
escape, which he chose not to take, but these methods are still an immoral way
of handling the situation. If a boy were to come up to an everyday woman
on the streets, that victim would not be as sensitive as Mrs. Jones was to the
boy she caught. To teach a young man that if you steal and you are going
to get special treatment is not an effective method of punishment.
First of all, the boy told Mrs. Jones that he tried to steal
her purse for one reason, to buy blue suede shoes for himself. She then
replies, “Well you didn’t have to snatch my pocketbook to get some blue suede
shoes... You could have just asked me.”
There are many faulty choices of judgments made in this comment, mainly
because the outcome of the situation would almost never happen in the real
world. The boy will now, after being told he should just ask for the
shoes, believe that anything he ever wants will come to his possession if would
just ask. To “trick” a child into being convinced that if you just ask a
woman for money or anything that she will give it to you is morally wrong, and
it is not fair for the boy to go through life having and accepting this state
of mind.
Secondly, Mrs. Jones allows the boy into her house and from
there a train of events happened that augmented the boys judgment more.
She told him that, “...I were young once and I wanted things I could not get...
You thought I was going to say, ‘but I didn’t snatch people’s pocketbooks.’
Well I wasn’t going to say that.” In stating this Mrs. Jones herself has shown
weakness in her lifestyle. The boy may now believe that since she had
been not as perfect as a child, he might turn out fine just as Mrs. Jones
had. She has now opened a door for the boy, in showing him through
another statement that intended that it was still wrong to make an attempt to
steal someone’s pocketbook, but you could still get away with the crime.
From the events in the story, the most obvious and penetrating theme would be
that Mrs. Jones taught the boy a valuable lesson by taking him in and pampering
him. But, by using the methods of deconstruction and digging deeply into
the true theme of the short story, you will find a recessive theme, secondary
to the obvious. In “Thank You, Ma’am,” the apparent theme is not as it
seems, and the true meaning is shown, that as complicated as life is, there is
not always someone for one to depend on. Mrs. Luella Bates Washington
Jones may have seemed like a strong role model for the boy, but truly set a
poor example for the boy by convincing him, not knowingly, but in her
sub-conscious, that it is admirable to steal and beg for things that you do not
have and want. A very important lesson could be taught within either
theme, and in the end it is a fight between two old enemies, good and evil.