Student
Mr. Maite
Honors English 9
3/12/01
The Lie: A
Feminist View
For hundreds of years some women
have been involved in an on going battle against men for equality. In the
story, "The Lie," the character Sylvia Remenzel portrays many of the
qualities in a stereotypical female that women for generations have been trying
to prove wrong. Her thoughts and actions, plus the possible opinions of females
reflecting upon her character, and the fact that this character was written by
a male will show the neglect by which the role was depicted.
To begin, Sylvia's questions
throughout the story are naive and juvenile.
For example, “I wonder how many Remenzels have gone to Whitehill,” and “You
think those people will like those rooms?” Questions such as these are simply put
and rather unnecessary because they only take up space and disrupt the flow.
The question concerning the number of Remenzel family members who have gone to
Whitehill has a pretty obvious answer. Her husband in the book even thinks so,
That's like asking how many people are dead in a cemetery. To have a female
character ask questions that are seemingly simple is putting them back, and
placing them in a group outside those with intelligence. The second question concerns
a new wing being built onto Whitehill where a group of Africans will be
staying. By calling the Africans, those people, gives the impression that she doesn't see them as
equals to herself. In the time period that this story was written, (during the
1970s), the issue of racism was partly over. This character was not trying to
be rude, but she did not have the intelligence to think differently. That alone
is a very degrading way of thinking, such as giving women less power of thought
than men. For example, Mr. Remenzel sees no problem with the Africans attending
the school, when he says, The rooms aren't for them, they aren't going to be segregated.
By observing these thoughts of Sylvia, one might see the lack of intuition and
observation put upon her. These are all examples of the possible feminist view
placed upon her.
Next, the actions that Sylvia
performs show her incomplete personality when it comes to being unique. Her
role follows the example that females should be seen and not heard, also, that
they are to stay at home and take care of the children. These are qualities
that women have been fighting to remove from the minds of society. Sylvia was
so intent on comforting Eli that she'd put out of her mind what her husband was
up to. This shows that Sylvia was so concerned with the welfare of her child
and playing her role of "mommy" that nothing else mattered. When Dr. Remenzel
goes to ask the board for the entrance of Eli, Sylvia rushes out of sight. In
these more recent days, a woman would not rely on a male to ask for a favor.
And again, while in the car on the way to the school, Sylvia sat the entire
time reading and asking meaningless and empty questions periodically. This
action implies that she had no ability to do anything else. She was not
writing a dissertation, solving a math problem, or involving herself in any
stimulating activity. Having this type
of role presents the idea that a female shouldn't do or won't do anything except
sit quietly and keep to oneself while the men do all of the challenging,
interesting, and recognizable things.
Lastly, this story was written by a
male, giving the impression, possibly, that he thinks that females are
incapable of doing anything meaningful or powerful. That, maybe, all of the
interesting and exciting and character building activities are to be left for
an "all powerful man." Although, the "man" character
doesn't really perform to the high standards that he should in this story
either. The author, Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. was involved in World War II where he
was captured by the Germans. Throughout this entire experience, he, most
likely, did not see many of the actions of war performed by females. This quite
possibly may have been where he developed his sexist thinking. Still, that does
not excuse the flighty and ignorant actions
portrayed by Sylvia.
The character, Sylvia Remenzel, is
a perfect example of how women do not want to be treated or portrayed. That is,
as if they are homely, thoughtless, and unimaginative beings only for the
possession of males. For many, many years females have been fighting for their independence
from men. When this story was written,
they had it, but still, men, like the author, continued to see them as the
opposite. Sylvia portrays these undesirable qualities in everything that she
does.