1This spring break was definately out of control. 2&3Now, I don't want to infer that I was a maniac, but I am having a great time right here in Ohio. 4For one thing, I spent almost three days building a puzzle only to find out I had no idea were the last two pieces were. 5Then, I got crazy by sponsoring a round robin Go Fish tournament for my friends and they wouldn't leave for two days. The rest of break I spent rearranging my straw wrapper collection. Truly, it was an eventful break.
1. error: misspelling of definitely
fix: This spring break was definitely out of control.
2. error: infer vs. imply
fix: Now, I don't want to imply that I was a maniac, but I am having a great time right here in Ohio.
3. error: tense shift
fix: Now, I don't want to infer that I was a maniac, but I had a great time right here in Ohio.
4. error: where, were, we're
fix: For one thing, I spent almost three days building a puzzle only to find out I had no idea where the last two pieces were.
5. error: run-on - comma with conjunction
fix: Then, I got crazy by sponsoring a round robin Go Fish tournament for my friends, and they wouldn't leave for two days.